"Rochessa Character sketch" by Andrew P. Morris

Quite honestly, I disagree with Anonymous (although it's nice to see someone using that alias that isn't a jerk...). I think the shoulders are fine in terms of proportion. What I see as off is her butt. It's a little too small compared to her hips (key words being 'a little.' I'm not suggestting you slap a ghetto-butt on her). Now, if you were going for the whole body-builder butt-look, then it would be perfect in terms of size, you'd just have to put in more muscle definition. Also, the biceps and that overall area of the arm probably needs to be a little bigger; right now they're about the same size as her forearms, and that just doesn't look right, especially on someone that works out as much as she obviously does!
Wow, this thing got long, but I hope you find it useful! Positive note to end on: I like the muscle detail you put into her back, very nice!

Andrew P. Morris replies: "LOL! Hehehe, thanks for your comments! About her butt, Rochessa is built like a zaftig fitness competitor. Note her pose, she is relaxed not flexed so definition will be minimal in that uh… region. I must say that I agree with you about her upper arms and I will rework that area. Thanks for the good feed back I always appreciate when someone takes the time to write thoughtful and thought provoking comments. "

OH my! Tour shading is very impressive, very very good drawing indeed

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Glad you enjoy it. "

Hi there, another comment on the proportions. I think they are just fine, but I would "take away" the breasts. I never noticed, that you can see the breast from behind and I don't think it is possible. Anyways, this picture is really good work!

Andrew P. Morris replies: "I am thinking the same thing."

I'm going to agree with March 20th's Anonymus. Her breasts would either have to be spaced really far apart or be enormous to be able to see that much from behind, especially with her wide shoulders.

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Thank you for commenting on those very good points.... *Dramatic Pause* TA-DA! The pic is now updated. I think I will leave it as is and maby do a coloring project. Thanks again and take care. ~AM"

Whoa dude, thats a strong healthy rear! Very nice work though. I really like the shading job. It really brings out the musculature.

Andrew P. Morris replies: "It is! Hey, I like drawing all kinds of bodies... (I seem to be saying that a lot today...) And when it comes to playing a chracter I chose one that was a bit older (late 30's) as a way of giving her more character and a different feel, as a result she calls most of the shots in the game. ~AM"

I think it's really well done, there's nothing wrong with her torso, i've got a very wide back and shoulders, small waist, and fairly small hips, sure i'm not hourglass ideal, but people are different, this is very realistic.

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Hi Rachel, thanks for commenting. I agree with you about the shoulders and like her anatomy as it stands (though I do think that her hips could be a tad wider). I have been meaning to get this one converted to a digital painting but have not had the time. Take care, ~Andrew"

Nice work on the shading, she's a very muscular woman! Her nose is a bit flat for my tastes, but her bum is perfect, (offcourse). Yes, you've done a brilliant job rendering her muscle tone.

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Michael, Thanks for the input! I will rework the nose and face a bit. I think the picture might come off better if she were in profile looking over her shoulder at the viewer. I did enjoy ah... working on her bum! "

This is a truly great piece of anatomical drawing! Awesome!

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Zebedee, Thank-you for commenting on my work. I was really trying to make this character stand out as a realistic looking woman. I am glad you think I have succeeded. "

Very impressive anatomy and shading! LOVE that cat!!!

Andrew P. Morris replies: "Jenny, thanks so much for commenting on this sketch, I am glad you like it! I was contemplating doing a color version someday but got stuck on the background scheme. The cat is an odd beast based upon one of my own who seems to know things that no one should know and is quite capable of rubbing against you for love and then shredding your ankle instead. "

VERY well done... I much agree with previous comments, nice shading and very well done on the anatomy... keep up the good work.